2017-04-09

andyg1128: (Default)
2017-04-09 04:03 pm

Beginnings

Once upon a time, in a land far far away.....

Bleh, that opening stinks. Let's try again...

There once was a Teddy bear who.....

Meh, better, but the way the internet is, that could lead down a very different path than intended... Start over.

It was the best of times, it was....

So it's plagiarism now?! Try again.

In the beginning....

Nope.Nope.Nope.

There once was a bear from Nantucket
Who went...STOP! Ok smarty pants, you've got one more shot at this. "Make it work."

<Getting irritated and tired of restarting>
I'm me, I write stories and sometimes silly comments of real life, and I am tired of trying to make my internal editor happy.

A little on the nose, but a good beginning...

Sigh....